first love…

 


prima iubire…

cireşul roșește

în iarnă târzie


first love…

the sky turns pink

in late winter


le premier amour…

le ciel devient rose

à la fin de l'hiver


hatsukoi

sora ga fuyu no owari ni

pinku ni naru


初恋…

空が色に変わる

ピンクになる


Many thanks to Ravi Kiran, Amanda White and Marion Clarke for including my senryu in the amazing issue 3 of Leaf, Journal of the Daily Haiku, April 2024. So much thanks to Keith Evetts for her commentary on my senryu

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