first love…
prima iubire…
cireşul roșește
în iarnă târzie
first love…
the sky turns pink
in late winter
le premier amour…
le ciel devient rose
à la fin de l'hiver
hatsukoi
sora ga fuyu no owari ni
pinku ni naru
初恋…
空が色に変わる
ピンクになる
Many thanks to Ravi Kiran, Amanda White and Marion Clarke for including my senryu in the amazing issue 3 of Leaf, Journal of the Daily Haiku, April 2024. So much thanks to Keith Evetts for her commentary on my senryu
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